Embrace
July 27th, 2010
I wish to plunge into the tranquil oceans of your embrace,
It’s so profoundly pacifying that I wish I never surface.
As the soothing waters of the clasp of your arms wash away my worries,
The mellow moments set in, time slows down, and there are no hurries.
Closing my eyes, I sink to the bottom; unlike the outside, it’s a peaceful place,
I feel your love and affection pierce through the waters like warm sunrays.
And just as sun rays nourish life on this earth, your embrace… it nourishes my soul,
And so, to give you a hug, I’d gladly travel from pole to pole.
Thanks to Nibhay Joshi for pointing out some grammatical errors.
Posted in Poems
1st reply! Pole position
Great poetry man!
Wow!!.. way to go man.. i like this one.. actually i am reading almost all your poems but this once kindf stands out.. hmm .. u can even write how you came to this poem. i mean the story behind it.. like sometimes we see rain and we think of something and after sometime we notice that its a poem. so u cna write the story behind these poems.. i mean i dont about others but i would be interested in reading it.
:-)..
@Pratod - Thanks man! Maybe the story can be the theme of the next poem
wow!!..wonderful expression!! ..and very imaginative..loved it a lot..
Super expression of feelings…of the love & warmth an embrace carries, of how needy a human being is for it….also…wonderful choice of words! I guess after a short sabbatical- you are back with a BANG!
gr8 work man…loved it
I m short of words …. Beautiful Expression
Return of poetic Rohit 
Beatutiful !!!
Seems like u r entering into the period of maturity in ur poetic life…
Beautiful poem with great feelings, keep it up.
Waah Ghalib !!
kaise sujta hai ? and then how does it still rhyme? fabulous !